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! ^: w( V; G n6 k目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香 2.
2 H6 q8 i& O& b3 w6 v4 e" U而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识 3." u, q% Y& N- O- x+ L, N
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2 V# O2 d( T5 }* V. p这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章。第一段，概述社会上文凭越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。 【范文】 l
5 K2 R+ S: I n6 J% w3 L# rKnowledge and Diploma It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.
4 q$ W4 u# j& j. y( }) Q% b/ aOn the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men. ! W4 a! _0 T* ]3 e, c
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion. J9 C. J, `8 k, Z$ q2 i- I# h' M
◇第一段思路点评：
$ w) x4 ]4 h% {7 D- Z先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法，再点出这是一种社会现实。
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job candidate求职者、应聘者# F8 j) L! `9 O
◇第二段思路点评：
& {6 [: Y& O Y' Y9 [9 R0 O6 f详细论述文凭并不等于能力。- I9 r. ?; J' K, R- k8 k
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acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢
. X: }1 C6 S% |◇第三段思路点评：
! N+ m( ], v- x使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的认识。* z" H- D( m U8 ~' b
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2 }# u: j8 J4 L6 U# j( v. |, _（1）equate a diploma with knowledge 把文凭与知识划等号' i1 c" U" V% a: f4 i
（2）nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期学习的证明 | 
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